ben.bucksch at beonex.com
Wed May 8 15:12:43 UTC 2019
beautiful design. I like the wireframe logo in the background. I like it.
Just one small suggestion: I find the new page a little busy, and the
major reason is the blog posts and newsletter parts. If you could merge
the blog section and the newsletter box, and put them both in the spot
where the newsletter box is right right, i.e. make it a lot smaller, by
listing only the headline of the blog posts, and make the newsletter
subscription a single line underneath the blog posts list, that would
already improve things a lot.
Putting less things on the page means that there is more focus on the
things that do remain, particularly the Donation section would gain
prominence by reducing the blog and newsletter section.
alex wrote on 08.05.19 07:36:
> And we got a winner!
> With all the wonderful feedback I got regarding the bright variation,
> I created a mix between the new and old version by keeping the bright
> colors, spending more time in creating slightly more curated
> decorative elements, and improved the pace of the content as well as
> the white space between elements.
> Let's use the logo in the background of the hero area with a wireframe
> effect. The current one is just temporary, I will create a dedicated
> and more refined version that will blend better.
> The rest of the pages will come later next week.
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